I have to say, this serial is written exceptionally well, but my problem with it is not the writing, it is its price which is why I felt cheated.
£6.40 is not what I would pay for an ebook. I'm sorry I never touch anything electronic sold for more than £4. It's an ebook. It's non-transferable and it's non-sellable, for me the value is diminished, and I know that I'm not the only one feeling this way.
Having said all that, Cherise Sinclair with her Club Shadowlands comes to mind when I think of Roni Loren's writing, but Loren's writing is emotionally more mature, deeper. I was hooked from the book one and I could not stop. Brabo, Miss Loren! It was beautiful!